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Disjointed

Almost 10 minutes today, and while it’s unquestionably better than nothing, maintaining a clear sense of continuity of storyline has been a bit tough. Part of this is it takes a little more effort and time to get grounded in where/when things were when I finished last, but the real difficulty is of my own making: All my reversals and shifts so far have made it difficult to remember whether a character has already said or done or revealed something.

And now my time is up.

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