The Dragon’s belly

I’m about halfway finished with fixing the Dragon issues*. It’s slow going because I have to read everything extra carefully, because Word doesn’t know context and a lot of the issues are often not ‘grammatical’ in the sense that the word in question is the proper part of speech for its place in the sentence, even though it makes no real sense whatsoever.

That said, it’s good to be reminded that this first section is still holding up well to re-reading. I think it does a good job with a very difficult personal situation that Kelly has to deal with, which I think/hope readers will appreciate.

And, yes, I’m revising as I go. It’s an illness. I know.


* Get it? ‘Halfway’? ‘Belly’? Oh, the horror . . .