Another Day… day 14 – yeah

it’s late and i’m starting to get a headache, but i spent two hours above the garage this evening and got 3+ pages.

the interaction between the two main characters is progressing apace, but they are not as i envisioned them back in the NaNoWriMo version. it took me a little to figure out why, but the NaNoWriMo was the characters at a later point in their relationship, while this story shows their introduction to one another.

this has been a very interesting experience, as i follow their development, with hopefully gentle nudges from time to time. i know i’m pushing in a couple places, but that’s what revision is for. the bulk of it, though, is flowing smoothly from the two characters and their environment, and i’m just glad to be watching.