RoE.d1.day46 – out of the frying pan

despite the fact that Herrick is in some hot water with the local crime boss (though not for the reasons he thought), the arrival of the police is not exactly the escape he was hoping for. his day just keeps getting worse.

also, i had another of those situations where what i expected to be some fair amount of dialogue was replaced by a far better single line of narrative that was not only easier but more true to the moment.