Even these mini-posts are helping

I had nearly half an hour this evening while Lillian took her post-dinner nap, but I’m afraid the page-plus that I wrote, while well-intentioned, is going to be a nearly wholesale casualty of the revision process. Something about the voice isn’t fitting. Trying too hard.

Ah! I’m dragging the scene out unnecessarily. Too much ‘splaining. Okay.

Huh. So these tiny little posts are actually helping. Pretty cool.

(Not sure why I can’t recognize this when the writing starts to go ‘off’, but I’ll take it when it comes.)